How is the prologue?- Fantasy?

I love it. The description and all really fits and it does go into the prologue section, but since you said critism the only few things I can say (being really picky here) is that I'd change Thank-you for your time, your majesty to sincerely, your majesty and perhaps Dear King Elijah. Also if you want a place to publish your story and get feedback I recommend the website booksie.com Good luck in future, and I hope I helped. XD :-)